Well here I am again – another Saturday and another poem! This week’s poem is one of the first poems I ever wrote, back in February. The idea for it came to me randomly in bed one night, and the next morning I wrote it out. (Brain-storming in bed is a pretty great way to get ideas, I’ve found :D) The central truth that it is based around is the fact that people who are hurt by others often will hurt others in return. Broken people often break others. But instead of me telling you about it, I’ll just let it speak for itself!
Hearts and Heels
a heel comes down
on a fragile vase
for a brief moment
it gives a weak resistance
then shatters
under the weight of the heel
the shattered pieces sparkle
bathed in sunlight
but when
the heel comes down again
expecting another failed resistance
it instead encounters
sharp shards
that pierce
and draw blood.
whole, the vase is beautiful
but weak
shattered, the vase harms
and pierces
broken things
can fight back too.
words rain down
on a fragile heart
for a brief moment
it gives a weak resistance
then shatters
under the cruelty of the words
the shattered pieces sparkle
bathed in tears
but when
the words rain down again
expecting another failed resistance
they instead encounter
sharp shards
that pierce
and draw blood
whole, the heart is beautiful
but weak
shattered, the heart harms
and pierces.
broken things
can fight back too
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Nice poem! 🙂
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Thanks
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This is a wonderful poem Hannah!
I always look forward to reading new posts!
Thank you!
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Aw, thanks Bronwyn! I’m glad you liked the poem! And I’m so glad you’re enjoying my blog! 🙂
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You’re welcome! You are a very talented writer! 😀
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This is a beautiful metaphor, Hannah. It illustrates well how our words can shatter and break another soul. My prayer often is that I would have goodness-filled words, “gracious words” (Col. 4:6) to “nourish many” (Prov. 10:21). This is a good way to respond, even when the heart is shattered. Love your writing! Enjoying it immensely!
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I’m glad you’re enjoying it! And yes, those are both very good things to pray for, for ourselves.
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Nice poem! Thanks for sharing it. 🙂
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Thank you, Grace. You’re welcome! 🙂
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