‘Tis very late… Somehow the weekend is already coming to a close, marking the end of another week. And slowly but surely this year is marching to the finish, and I’m not entirely sure how I feel about it…
Anyways, my feelings are entirely disconnected to the poem I’m going to share with you all today. 😀 The prompt was to write about some abandoned place… and this was the result.
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Light tiptoes down the hall, busy –
spinning shadow spiderwebs from the ceiling,
poking curious fingers beneath a forgotten newspaper.
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No time to notice:
the brassy fly knocking on a molded window,
dust sleeping in the corner.
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Pea green paint slips from tired walls,
soaked with yesterday’s rain that dripped
through a jagged skylight.
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A blue model plane with a broken wing lies quiet,
flight shattered, alone on an empty floor –
small grave, no flowers.
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I’d love to hear your thoughts about this poem in the comments! Do you see beauty in abandoned places? Do they strike emotion in you?
Well done, Hannah! It does have an abandoned feel. 😌
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I love the imagery this poem evokes! Abandoned places can definitely have a certain mysterious beauty about them. I nominated you for the Outstanding Blogger Award: https://authorevelynbrooks.wordpress.com/2020/11/08/the-outstanding-blogger-award/
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Yes, wonderful descriptions and imagery as, with words, you painted settings of abandonment, Hannah. I guess I never thought to look for beauty in abandoned places, but I shall have to look harder. 😊
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